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A Case of Identity, Part 1

I sat in Sherlock Holmes’s bed staring dumbly at the wall in front of me, my conscience laden with sorrow and regret in equal measure. With a heavy sigh, I threw the sheet back, rose to my feet and slowly began to dress. I dreaded facing Holmes again, wary of the damage wrought by this brief and bizarre encounter and terrified at the implications for our future relations. I considered exiting through the door that led to the second-floor landing and going directly to my own room, but thought better of it. To avoid him entirely would be a far greater and more awkward mistake than whatever conversation we were about to have.

When I was fully dressed, I drew a large breath and braced myself. As boldly as I could, I opened the door to the sitting room and entered it.

Holmes was sitting at his chemistry set, peering through a microscope and jotting notes in the little book he kept beside the table. I walked past him to the front window, and stared into the street. Mentally, I cast about for something, anything to say to him that would sound halfway close to normal, desperate to hear him address me in his old familiar tone.

“I say, there’s quite a lot of traffic for this time of night. Wonder what has so many people milling about in the middle of the week?” I glanced over my shoulder in hopes of garnering a response. Holmes ignored me, picked up a large beaker full of red fluid and poured it into an empty glass.

I tried again. “Holmes, please. You must forgive me for—“

He abruptly raised a hand, and cut me off. “There is nothing to forgive. Please do not trouble yourself over such a trifle incident. Now let us put the whole matter behind us.” He returned to his solutions, indicating the conversation was to go no further.

“I should be very glad to do so,” I returned gratefully. I stretched my arms over my head, and indulged in a slow yawn.

“I think I shall retire, then. It has been an exceedingly long day.” I turned and made my way for the door.

“Good night, Watson,” Holmes said tersely without looking up from his work.

An icy blow struck my chest at the way this was delivered, but I could see no use in making a labor of an already painful exchange.

“Good night, dear fellow,” I whispered back, hoping he would recognize the affection in my voice. Whether he did or not, I’ll never know.

When I at last reached my room, I collapsed onto my narrow bed and buried my face in the pillow. My mind revisited the events of the preceding day, scanning every moment for the opportunity to admit a mistake on my part alone. But I could not. It was difficult enough to make sense of it all.

*          *          *          *

The previous afternoon, Holmes had concluded a case that had long confounded Scotland Yard when he discovered that a wealthy stock broker’s death had been brought about by a chemical reaction that resulted when the victim added his sleeping draught to his heart medication. The effect had been almost instantaneous suffocation.

Few things delighted Holmes more than outshining Inspector Lestrade, and the added element of chemical analysis had my friend feeling unusually exuberant after the murderer had been identified and arrested. The grateful family showered Holmes with heartfelt praises and a small sachet of gold coins, which Holmes promptly took to Romano’s to treat me to an early dinner. He was especially indebted to my assistance, for my examination of the body left me entirely unsatisfied as to the cause of death, and I voiced my reservations over and above the medical examiner assigned to the case. I was certain there had been foul play where he was not, and Holmes congratulated me on my instincts.

Over our meal, Holmes filled in the details that had escaped me, explaining how the heart medication had been tampered with, and how only someone with an expert knowledge of chemistry would have known how to generate a combination of toxins that would strike a fatal blow and then vanish without a trace. I took his affectionate glances at me for gratitude, and I returned them with equal sincerity, for Holmes knew how much I appreciated a stimulating adventure and a fine meal.

We returned to Baker Street arm in arm, laughing heartily as we recounted the Yard’s numerous missteps, how certain the officers had been that death had been accidental, how smugly Lestrade announced that the investigation was closed, how surprised they all were when Holmes demonstrated the chemical reaction that had actually taken place. True to form, Holmes shunned all offers to be credited with solving the case, preferring instead to spend the evening with me rather than talk to the scads of reporters that surfaced in the aftermath of the arrest. His work is its own reward, and I admire him all the more for it.

It was later that evening when Holmes revealed that he desired me. I was trying not to look as shocked as I was, for I had never dreamed that my unsentimental and logic-oriented friend was capable of such feelings. That they were for me alone was positively dumbfounding, but it made sense in its way. He had never shown the slightest sign of interest in the many alluring and desirable women who commissioned his services, no matter how overtly some of them tried to win his affections. They were only clients to him, and when the case was solved, he immediately ceased his professional attentions and took up with whatever he had been doing before they rang. It was always up to me to usher them to the door and offer a polite but hasty goodbye, if only to cover the fact that Holmes cared nothing for such social graces.

When he told me of his feelings that night, he did not do so in a particularly remarkable way; there was no long speech leading up to a declaration, no emotional confession. He simply told me he had recognized deeper stirrings underneath his regard for me, and thought I should know of it.

“Holmes, I hardly know what to say,” I said in astonishment.

“What can you say, Watson? I have blindsided you entirely,” was his swift and sensible reply. He proceeded to flutter about the sitting room, stoking the fire and packing his pipe, glaring into the bowl as he lit it with a smoldering ember.

I stood motionless in the middle of the room feeling rather like a guest in my own home.

“I’m flattered by your statement,” I offered as I watched him spin about the room.

“No doubt,” he said breezily. I had to laugh. Of anything he could have said in response, this was the most like him.

He chuckled in spite of himself, and finally approached where I stood. He shyly reached one hand out, seemingly uncertain as to whether he should take mine.

“What is it you propose to do now?” I asked him kindly.

“I should like to kiss you,” he returned, a stilted smile still playing at his lips.

“Would you?” I replied playfully. I must admit the curiosity was powerful, and my heart began to pound. “You may proceed.”

He took a step forward, and placed one hand behind my neck. He pulled my face to his, stopping only once to offer me a brief smile, closed his eyes and placed his lips over mine.

It was a light kiss, which surprised me. For a man so bold in his actions, I expected something far more aggressive. But he simply let his soft lips hover just on top of mine for a few moments, then let me go. It was very sweet.

When he stepped back, I opened my eyes and saw again his shy smile.

“You do not recoil in horror. You do not push me away in disgust,” he observed.

“Hardly,” said I. “In fact, if I may be so bold…”

This time I stepped forward and placed my lips on his. This singular feeling, the headiness of finding out that one’s dearest friend harbours such regard compelled me to seek the taste of him again and linger upon it. I had ample experience with such actions, but none with a member of my own sex. While the particular experience had not occurred to me, nor had it struck me as the act of gross indecency defined by law. I had always believed that what transpired between consenting adults should be no one else’s concern.

Holmes responded warmly to my embrace, allowing his hands to rest at my waist and his mouth to open just slightly. I dared to let my tongue dart past his teeth just once which delighted him, for he opened further and tilted his head at a greater angle to deepen the kiss. It was utterly delicious.

It was he who broke the kiss, and when I again looked into his face I saw it had coloured with a considerable flush, and there was eager excitement dancing behind his keen grey eyes.

“Tell me, Holmes,” I started to say, but he knew what I was about to ask.

“For a brief period,” he said, “when I was sixteen. I’d a friend at boarding school with whom I shared private quarters. For three months we experimented in all matters physical until the headmaster responded to the rumours that we had grown suspiciously close.”

Holmes did not appear particularly troubled by this memory, so I pressed him.

“What became of your friend?” I asked him.

“Transferred to another school. I was as bored as I was lonely when he left, so I took up boxing and soon thought of him less and less. I could not call it love because I never thought of him beyond the skills we honed together in the bedroom. I considered it a rite of passage of a kind, though admittedly unlike those the boys around me were experiencing with members of the opposite sex. Once he left my company, I moved on to other matters of young manhood.” Holmes looked at me expectantly.

“So for the next thirty-some years you’ve felt no similar inclinations?” I asked.

“I suppose not. Not enough to pursue in any case. But lately, with you, it has become rather…singular…” he trailed off here and gazed at me intensely but with an unreadable expression. 

Unsure what to say next, I took up his hand in mine, and we both looked down at the floor. He looked up a moment later. “And what about you, Watson? Are you in unfamiliar territory?”

“Yes,” I admitted, “though I cannot say it’s entirely unpleasant.”

A smile lit up his face. “Ah!” he said, “Then you have no objections if I do this?”

Without waiting for a response, he pulled me to him, wrapping his lean, muscular arms entirely around my form and kissing me again with renewed vigour.

How easy it was to become lost in this! A certain kind of magnetic energy envelopes Holmes wherever he goes, and he is capable of drawing the eyes of a roomful of people to himself without uttering a single word. I often did marvel at his incredibly lithe physique and the subtle grace that accompanied his every movement, to say nothing of the dark, angular features that turned many a head in his direction. I have written extensively on his eyes and the enigmatic flame that flickers behind them on a constant basis, flaring with the advent of a case, waning when exhausted or gripped by a dark mood. It is here that the whole of his stunning persona seems to be the most concentrated. And the way they looked at me tonight would remain fixed in my memory for a very long time.

Finding myself pulled into such a charismatic sphere, I was hardly apprehensive about letting our activities escalate, and rarely did I turn down an opportunity for adventure, especially with Sherlock Holmes.

I barely noticed that he had pushed my jacket from my shoulders and commenced unbuttoning my waistcoat. I found that my own hands followed suit almost of their own volition, divesting him of his cravat and collar before cradling his face.

With little inhibition remaining, I let my tongue play over his, sucking it alternately into my mouth and starting over again and again with my lips trying every angle. We were soon both out of breath, and stopped momentarily to take in some air.

“Will you join me in the bedroom?” he asked me in a low, velvety murmur. As if to prove the necessity of his question, he took my hand and placed it over his groin to feel his arousal. I swallowed. Surely this was the next step?

“As you wish,” I murmured back, tasting him once more.

He broke off, turned and led me into his room. After locking the door, we resumed undressing one another and were soon entirely nude, nestled together in his bed. I realized his brilliant hands were capable of so much more than rifling through evidence as one pressed gently into my lower back while the other traced over the contours of my body. I simply held him as his breathing quickened and he began to nudge my growing arousal.

He rolled on top of me, straddling my waist and pressing his swollen member into mine. I felt his back muscles flexing as his movements intensified, and it was here that I felt the first grips of panic.

I had never done this before, and it flashed into my mind the absurd question of which one of us was supposed to be the man. Surely it was him, writhing ecstatically on top of me. What did that make me?

I suddenly wanted to stop, but did not dare interrupt him in such a remarkably urgent state—I know well the painful effect a half-consummated encounter can have on a man. I willed my mind to remain calm and remember how thrilling it had all been up to this point. I placed both hands on his back and allowed him to continue, hoping my physical response would again take over and blot out the disturbing thoughts that had broken into my conscience.

Holmes groaned aloud as he ground into me, thrusting his hips into mine so forcefully that I could feel our hipbones chafe. His cries grew more frequent as he buried his head in my shoulder, and I realized there was nothing I could do to reignite either enthusiasm or desire. My only wish now was for a swift ending. I squeezed my eyes closed and held him against me until he stiffened and then shuddered to his death. I held my breath as his semen spread across my stomach and seeped onto the bed, waiting for the aftershocks to subside.

When stillness came, he lifted himself up and brought his swollen lips again to mine. I kissed him back hesitantly, and attempted to return his sated smile. He reached down for my cock, but I pushed him away before he could see that it had softened entirely.

“It’s all right, Holmes, really,” I said lightly, trying to sound as if I had been completely satisfied by his release. He attempted again to kiss me, but I pursed my lips and turned my head away. As soon as I did so, I knew there was no way such an observant man could mistake my demeanour.  I was not wrong.

I glanced over at him just long enough to see his eyes widen and his lips part as he slowly drew back in a state of shocked disbelief.

“It really was lovely…I mean, I’m just not used to…I’m not sure I….” I tried to explain, but the damage was done.

“I see,” Holmes said quietly, and shrank to the other side of the bed with such an expression of sadness and disappointment that I could not bear to look at him.  I taxed my brain to come up with the right words to say to him, to at least make the tension bearable, but it was no use. After a long silence, he noiselessly sat up, reached for the dressing gown he kept draped over his bedstand and put it on with his back to me.

“I’ll leave you some privacy to dress,” he said quietly, wrapping his arms tightly around himself. He left the bedroom, closing the door behind him.

Oh, how many times I played and re-played those events in my head, hoping to uncover a sure sign of my wrongdoing so I could take it to him and tell him how sorry I was. All I wanted to do was assuage the rejection and humiliation that had left him sad and speechless in an effort to quickly repair the erosion of our friendship. But a thousand apologies would never have been enough, and short of attempting even that, there was nothing left to be said.

I was not surprised to find that he had risen early and left Baker Street by the time I arrived in the sitting room the following morning, nor was I surprised when he did not return until very late that night, long after he knew I would have retired. I had no choice but to afford him his space, and hope that in due time he would somehow forgive me.

For my part, I busied myself at St. Bart’s during the days and whiled away more hours than usual at my club in the evenings.

“We’ve been seeing an awful lot of you these days, Dr. Watson,” my friend Thurston said warmly on my fifth consecutive night at the billiard tables. “To what do we owe this privilege?”

“Oh, I suppose cabin fever has been pressing upon me,” I responded lightly. I was having difficultly making casual conversation, and truthfully I only remained at the club to stave off the crushing loneliness of an empty Baker Street and an uncertain future with my best friend.

“No interesting cases with Mr. Holmes?” Thurston asked innocently, though I could have throttled him for it.

“They don’t always concern me,” I replied, trying to keep my tone even and non-vexed.

“Well, I just read in the Times that he captured a band of thieves who had been posing as kitchen staff and robbing an invalid woman of her inheritance over a period of months,” Thurston continued. “Sounded like a most damnable business and how he learnt of their identities is anyone’s guess. I would have thought you’d have been at his side for that one.”

“Sometimes the man prefers to work alone,” I snapped as I thrust my cue towards the corner pocket. “Besides, I have work of my own to attend to at St. Bart’s. I’m still a doctor you know.”

Thurston backed away and shook his head in protest. “No harm was meant by it, Dr. Watson. Please forgive my invasive questions.”

I sighed and leaned against the table. “I’m sorry, Thurston,” I said wearily. “It’s been a long week for us both and I suppose I’d rather not speak about it.”

We finished our game in strained silence. I returned my cue to its stand, bid good-night to Thurston and left the club. My time of asylum had run out. If one more person asked me about Holmes I feared I would break him in half.

I slowly made my way back to Baker Street that night, expecting again to find the sitting room bereft of my flat-mate and a cold supper long ago left by Mrs. Hudson. But when I turned onto our street, I saw a light in the window. My heart rate sped and I dared to hope that Holmes was up there and willing to finally speak to me. I hurried my pace and went inside. When I opened the door to the sitting room, there sat Holmes, finishing a cup of tea and idly sorting through the day’s mail. He looked up when he saw me, and I was momentarily stunned by the parade of expressions that instantly crossed his face; it had first brightened at my presence, immediately darkened and just as quickly shifted to indifference, where it remained when he uttered a noncommittal greeting.

“Evening, Holmes,” I responded in the same even tone. “Has Mrs. Hudson brought supper?”

“She has, but I sent her away,” he replied. “There may still be a warm plate if you should like to ring her.”

I was not actually hungry, and I waved away his suggestion. I crossed the room and poured a glass of brandy for myself, then settled in the chair opposite Holmes at the table.

“How have you been?” I asked him cautiously.

“Busy,” he sighed, “I have been busy, Watson. I suppose you heard that the entire staff of Whidby Manor has been placed under arrest?”

“I had heard that somewhere, yes,” I said as I took a sip of my drink.  

“It is unfortunate that the majority of the stolen jewelry has long since been sold for cash, but I was able to recover a goodly portion of the lady’s sword collection. Such items rarely get far for their singular military features,” he said.

I was crestfallen. Glad as I was that Holmes was speaking to me again, I would have loved to accompany him on such a case. But I could hardly blame him for shunning my company after what had happened.

“I’ve no doubt you left another grateful family in your wake,” I said encouragingly.

Holmes offered one of his brief half-smiles right before he frowned at a letter that lay across his lap.

I patiently sipped my brandy while he read in silence.

“Hum,” he said when he finished, folding the document and returning it to its envelope.

“Something of interest?” I asked hopefully.

“Perhaps,” he said. “Then again, perhaps not.” He looked down again.

“Holmes,” I said, leaning forward. “I wish you’d let me explain.”

He looked up in surprise. “What is there to explain, friend Watson? I nearly forced you into a situation which undoubtedly made you uncomfortable, and which you politely endured as long as you could, and now we both know such a boundary should never be crossed again.”

“Force is hardly the word, Holmes,” I said in equal surprise. “I was a willing participant until—“ I stopped.

“Until what?” he asked me sharply.

“Until I…wasn’t sure who I was supposed to be,” I said, and as soon as the words escaped my lips I realized how strange and senseless they sounded.

“You are John H. Watson, M.D. My friend and colleague. Nothing more,” he said, then added with a sincere smile, “and nothing less.”

I smiled back. “I must admit I’ve missed being in on your cases. It’s a slack time of year at the hospital.”

“Then I shall keep you apprised of anything that comes our way,” he promised. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I think I shall retire for the night. I have been keeping rather late hours this week.”

“’Night, Holmes,” I said with no small trace of relief in my tone.

He nodded once as he walked towards his bedroom and closed the door.

For the first time in over a week, I slept that night. I slept so soundly that I had an uncharacteristically vivid series of dreams, all of which concerned Holmes. The first few were not so noteworthy; we were mired in our usual line of pursuit, though the criminals always remained unseen and their motives never clear. These mostly came down to odd, linear conversations between myself and the detective in which I was coaxing him to divulge more details than he was offering. In one particular dream he was showing me a knife that had been twisted beyond all recognition. Yes, but what does that make me, Holmes? I continued to ask him. He refused to answer. He just kept urging me to examine it, to look closer, to observe. But the closer I looked at the object before me, the more blurred it became.

I woke briefly to the sound of rain coming down against the window. I fell asleep again and dreamt anew.

This time, Holmes was lying on the settee, clothed only in a shirt and trousers. He was holding up a blue and green painting and trying to see the light through it. It’s okay if you hold it upside down, I said to him. He merely frowned and shook his head. I walked over to him, took the painting in from his hands and tossed it away. I grabbed his collar and attacked his mouth with my own. The taste of him immediately sent the blood to my groin, and I climbed atop him and feverishly began to unfasten his trousers. Let’s hold this up to the light, I said, taking out his smooth cock and holding it delicately in my hand. Or shall I…? He shook his head. Put it back, he said, it’s not yours. I felt urgent. Please, I begged him. He shook his head again. So I laid on top of him, pressing his cock to my stomach and telling him to be quiet, though he wasn’t saying a word. The lightning bolts that traveled between his body and mine were incredible, and after only a few quick thrusts, I reached a profound climax.

I awoke suddenly in a full-body sweat, face down on my pillow, and aware of a cooling wetness underneath my hips. Thoroughly confused and not fully conscious, I rolled over and covered my face with my arm. What did it mean?

*          *          *          *

I slept late the next morning, still troubled by the inscrutable scenarios with which my conscience challenged me throughout the night. I washed and came downstairs to an empty sitting room, though Mrs. Hudson had left a fresh pot of coffee and some toast on the table. I assumed Holmes had risen and left early again until I heard shuffling noises coming from his bedroom. He emerged in his dressing gown, beautiful grey eyes aglow, bearing a foolscap document in his hand.

“There’s money in this case, Watson,” he said excitedly. “Have you ever heard of the name Garrideb?”

“No. I’m sure I would remember a name so strange as that,” I replied, heartened by the return to a familiar routine.

“Well, if you can locate this fellow, a princely sum shall be yours,” he gazed eagerly at the document in his hand. “Rather a whimsical little scheme,” he added under his breath.

“I’m all ears,” I said enthusiastically, but he waved his hand in front of me.

“I believe I will let the man explain it to you himself when he visits us later this morning. But mark that name, Watson,” said he, and he glided to the table and poured himself a cup of coffee.

 A short time later, we heard a knock at the door and presently Mrs. Hudson arrived with a calling card bearing the name John Garrideb, Counsellor at Law.

“Are we rich already, Holmes?” I asked him jokingly.

He snorted. “Hardly that, Watson. Show him in, Mrs. Hudson.”

A few moments later, John Garrideb was standing in the sitting room. He was an American, but Holmes instantly observed he had been in England for some time, a revelation that seemed to take the short but powerful man a little off his guard.

“Your clothes, sir,” Holmes said, “are entirely English. It is very simple. Pray, take a seat.” He motioned towards an empty chair.

I remained a little distance from Holmes and our guest, as the two discussed details of the letter which were not yet known to me. From their conversation, I learnt that it had been sent by a Mr. Nathan Garrideb of Kansas, who was a direct relation of the man who had just entered our sitting room. The present Mr. Garrideb struck me as very suspicious in his nature, and for a time, Holmes had to employ his most soothing voice in order to placate his growing vexation. Finally, Holmes gestured towards me and invited Mr. Garrideb to tell his story, partly for the benefit of my ignorance.

Mr. Garrideb’s eyes narrowed at me. “Must he be involved?” he demanded.

Holmes was unfazed. “We usually work together,” he replied evenly.

“Very well,” said Garrideb, “I suppose there’s no secret in this.” And he proceeded to tell a most singular story about a man also named Garrideb who made his fortune in real estate in the United States. When he chanced to meet the man before us, he confessed his strange interest in collecting a roster of men who shared their odd name. John Garrideb had initially dismissed him, only to learn a year later that his namesake acquaintance had passed away and left a bizarre will. The elder Garrideb’s sizeable estate was his on the condition that he uncover two other Garrideb men and split the fortune among them. He had one stroke of luck upon finding a Mr. Nathan Garrideb in London, but the possibility of another in connection with him seemed to stop there.

I glanced over at Holmes as he listened to this tale, and interjected now and again with pointed questions. He sat in his chair with one leg drawn up at the knee and an expression of patient amusement surfacing ever so slightly under his professional mien. I let my gaze linger on him for how handsome and confident he looked, so apparently relaxed, though I knew he could burst into flight in an instant and disappear from the room in a whirl of sudden energy. For some reason, my heart beat faster at the thought. When Holmes chanced to look over in my direction, I quickly lowered my eyes to my notebook and hastily scribbled some notes.

The interview concluded with Holmes agreeing to help Garrideb and his lawyer locate another heir to the American fortune. As the man prepared to leave 221B, Holmes casually asked him if he knew an old acquaintance of his in Topeka, to which Garrideb enthusiastically replied in the affirmative. Holmes offered a peculiar smile in return, we shook hands all around, and Garrideb exited onto Baker Street.

“What do you make of it, Watson?” Holmes asked me, his eyes shining as he leaned against the fireplace and lit his pipe.

“A most extraordinary set of circumstances, I should say,” I replied, “but I am a mite baffled by it. What do you make of it?”

Holmes smiled as he waved out the flame of his matchstick. “Extraordinary is correct. Never have I heard such a pack of lies heaped upon me in a single interview. Everything about him rang false. I knew no such person in Topeka, and neither did the man who just left us.” He sucked thoughtfully on the stem of his pipe. “This case is most interesting,” he said, rather to himself.

That evening, Holmes and I paid a call to Mr. Nathan Garrideb, a strange elderly man who clearly seldom left the comforts of his strange home. He ushered us into a large round room, which resembled a small museum for the collections of all manner of scientific subjects. Holmes’s eyes shone with curious interest as he made his way about the place, stopping momentarily to let his hand wander idly over a plaster skull or microscope. I was momentarily startled by the unbidden memory of those same hands caressing my body, pressing into my back and holding my face. I gasped inaudibly at the curious twitching in my nether regions, but the physical sensation was halted when we heard a sharp rapping upon the door.

Nathan Garrideb promptly opened the door, and greeted an American lawyer. The latter was quite excited, for he announced he had found a third Garrideb, and heartily congratulated his host on becoming a very rich man. As the two arranged for N. Garrideb to collect his newfound wealth in Birmingham the following afternoon, I was struck by a queer sense of déjà vu, though I could not place the source of it. It pressed upon my mind from that point forward, however, even more so when Holmes suddenly inquired after Garrideb’s house agent. When we finally left the man’s house, Holmes and I parted ways. I went back to Baker Street, he sped off to Scotland Yard. I remained preoccupied on my solo journey as I turned the case over in my mind and tried to find a connection. I was vexed as ever when I returned home and spent some hours at my writing desk puzzling over the odd facts that I had recorded in my notebook.

Holmes arrived home soon after, and he greeted me warmly before stepping into his bedroom to change into his dressing gown. When he re-emerged, he took a cigarette from his case and perched on the edge of the settee.

“We’ve seen it before, Watson,” he said thoughtfully.

“I thought so,” I said wearily, “but I cannot quite—“

He leaned forward, and spoke in a low, excited tone, “A bizarre will based on a singular characteristic, a lone man promised a fortune, an elaborate plan to get him out of the house…”

And suddenly it came clear.

I snapped my fingers. “The Red-Headed League!”

Holmes smiled, “Excellent, Watson!”

I joined Holmes on the settee, and asked eagerly, “I presume you asked after the house agent to find out what secret lies within that particular home?”

“Exactly,” he said, still smiling.

“And what of your inquiries at Scotland Yard?” I continued eagerly.

Holmes’s joyful expression turned dark as he sighed and rose from the settee. He placed his hands in his pockets and spoke again with his back to me. “I have identified our client as a man with a sinister and murderous reputation. I fear I am putting you in some danger with the resolution of this case.” He turned and looked gravely down at me.

“It is not our first foray into such conditions,” I said, as I looked up at him.

He started to say something else, but furrowed his brow and stopped himself. Then he offered me one of his half-smiles and replied, “Very well. We shall call upon the empty home of Nathan Garrideb tomorrow at four o’ clock. Bring your revolver.”

That night, I dreamt again of Holmes, but my blurred morning memory of it amounted to no more than passing images of Holmes and myself running after carriages, bolting in and out of buildings, and I was never certain if we were chasing or being chased. Holmes always remained several steps ahead of me and I could not see past him to the object of our pursuit. Nor could I see behind me, for every time I turned my head all I saw was white light. I called out to him repeatedly, but he never turned to answer me.

The following day, we returned to Nathan Garrideb’s strange home, only this time we were quite alone on the premises. His housekeeper had let us in, then promptly left, and so we crouched in a corner shadow and waited for our client. Anticipation passed like electricity between us, and I felt my breath quicken when we heard a key turn in the lock and the cautious footsteps of the man who had called himself John Garrideb, Counsellor at Law. He had his purpose clear in mind, for we watched him move a table, pull up the rug and open a trap door with all the confidence of a seasoned criminal.

Holmes squeezed my wrist and nodded towards the hole in the floor. We crept over to it and I extracted my gun. At the sound of the creaking floorboards, the criminal’s head popped up and he saw in an instant that his game was up. In a final and desperate feat, he pulled a gun from his breastpocket and fired two shots. I cried out from the hot pain that struck my thigh. In the blink of an eye, Holmes was on his feet and he struck the man a mighty blow to the back of his head, sending him bloodied and sprawling to the floor. After he searched him for weapons and found no more, Holmes put his arms around me and dragged me to a chair. He looked at me with wide, terrified eyes.

“You’re not hurt, Watson? For God’s sake, say that you are not hurt!”

I looked at my friend in astonishment, for his usual expression of trenchant focus had been replaced by soft, rimmed eyes and shaking lips. To look at him was to experience the greatest epiphany of my life.

“It’s…it’s all right, Holmes. Just a scratch,” I answered when I found my voice.

He tore open my trousers before I could protest and exhaled a sigh of relief when he saw the wound was entirely superficial. Then he turned towards the criminal, shooting daggers from his eyes as he snarled, “It is as well for you. If you had killed Watson, you would not have got out of here alive.” He righted my clothing and helped me to my feet. The case had reached its denouement.

Killer Evans, as he was called, was promptly rounded up by the officers of Scotland Yard. It had been a counterfeit printing press he was after, which had resided underneath Nathan Garrideb’s feet for the five years he had lived there, entirely unbeknownst to him. As with the flaming red hair of Mr. Jabez Wilson, Garrideb’s odd name had given Evans the opportunity to craft a cunning and elaborate scheme to make sure he was absent during the break-in.

Holmes led me, limping and shaky, to a cab that carried us back to Baker Street. My nerves were frazzled, but it was not due to my brush with death, for I’ve had more of those than I should ever recount, nor could I attribute it to the physical strain caused by the searing scratch that pained my leg. It was the look on Holmes’s face and the urgency in his voice that echoed again and again in my head. In that moment I knew that his desire for me was not borne of idle curiosity, boredom, or simply an urge to satisfy baser instincts. Sherlock Holmes had loved me.

Comments

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emeraldreeve
Aug. 8th, 2009 09:04 am (UTC)
Very intriguing and sad start! I felt for both of them. The ending to this chapter is perfect and heart-touching.
takobob
Aug. 27th, 2009 06:06 pm (UTC)
:D
I'm bummed that you don't have more comments. :C You deserve a lot more recognition.
I usually avoid fanfiction for things like Sherlock Holmes- it's hard for me to read crappy fics, and it's more than I can take to see beloved characters butchered by bad writing. I'm so glad that you're the first person I stumbled upon when I looked up Holmes/Watson fics. C: Everyone's flawlessly in character (eccentric characters like Sherlock Holmes are so easy to fuck up, you know?), your writing is so engaging that, at some points, I felt like I was reading another Sir ACD story. (Until the naked bits, of course, but I could easily picture them as cannon, too.)

Anyway, thank you sooo much for writing awesome fics. I've read everything but Summer of Change, which I'm onto as soon as I finnish this comment. I really hope that you write more soon! :D
charlotteyonge
Aug. 27th, 2009 08:12 pm (UTC)
Re: :D
My blushes, tako! Thanks for taking the time to share your very kind thoughts with me. There are so many great fanfic writers out there, I'm flattered to be considered a good one among them. Your type of feedback (and a little inspiration from the Granada series) are what inspire me to write more.

Enjoy Summer of Change (my first one) and don't be a stranger!
CY
rusted_halo
Jun. 26th, 2010 09:18 pm (UTC)
This chapter is possibly the most artful, compelling, and true-to-character Sherlock Holmes story ever written by someone other than Sir ACD himself.

I love the entire story - the angsty beginning, the sudden step back to witness how it came about, the unhurried way you resolve it, and especially the happy ending - but I am particularly taken with your realistic recounting of the confusing dreams Watson had. As a reader, I seldom experience the emotions of the characters, but you have made me do exactly that.

I don't think I'll forget this line for a long time: "...passing images of Holmes and myself running after carriages, bolting in and out of buildings, and I was never certain if we were chasing or being chased."
charlotteyonge
Jun. 30th, 2010 06:45 pm (UTC)
Oh what an incredibly sweet thing to say! Thank you so much for commenting about the story and how it affected you. This is precisely what makes it so rewarding to write fan fic. Thank you again!
cmdc
Sep. 23rd, 2010 09:54 am (UTC)
This is great. I love it when bedroom scenes don't go entirely smoothly.
charlotteyonge
Sep. 23rd, 2010 12:07 pm (UTC)
Right. ;) Makes it all the more rewarding to figure out how to make the next one better.

Thanks for the comment!
tripleransom
Sep. 7th, 2013 03:35 am (UTC)
Poor Watson and poor Holmes. What an awkward position to be in!

And yet, it rings so true, Much better than those fics in which one or both of them is completely inexperienced, but within seconds they are having hot monkey sex with no mention of lube.
charlotteyonge
Sep. 8th, 2013 09:15 pm (UTC)
I know the fics you're talking about. Hey, there's all kinds of writers here. Some like to get right to it, I guess. I was always inspired by the ones who could have all the sexy funtimes without sacrificing character. It's rewarding to hear that you think this story rang true. Thank you. ;)
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